Revision Wizards

In this episode, V.E. Griffith and Miss Catherine M.H. explore the concept of author voice, defining it as the unique way a writer narrates a story, distinct from character dialogue. The hosts discuss when and where author voice is employed, particularly how it interacts with the story's inherent "pulse" or rhythm. They also touch upon the uniqueness of author voice while acknowledging the practice of mimicking other authors for practice or market trends. Practical aspects of editing author voice are covered, including word choice, sentence structure, and paragraphing, with one host emphasizing adapting their voice to genre. Finally, the discussion addresses when to remove or temper author voice to avoid interfering with character development and the importance of differentiating character voices from the author's own.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2650

This episode, hosted by Lon Varnadore and VE Griffith, dedicates episode 62 to the topic of editing timelines in writing. They define timelines, emphasizing its importance, especially when managing multiple points of view. The hosts discuss their individual methods for tracking timelines, with one preferring to discover issues during revision and the other utilizing software like Aeon Timeline for better organization. They explore how complex timelines, such as those with unique calendar systems, can pose significant challenges for writers, ultimately recommending the use of tools to identify and rectify inconsistencies and ensure internal consistency within the story.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2648

This podcast episode, "Editing White Rooms," features a discussion between co-hosts Miss Catherine MH and VE Griffith, as they explore the concept of "white rooms" in writing—scenes lacking descriptive setting. They each share their personal struggles with incorporating setting details, with Miss Katherine MH tending to over-describe and VE Griffith often under-describing. The hosts offer practical advice for writers and editors on how to identify and address white rooms, emphasizing the importance of sensory details and character interaction with the environment to create a more immersive experience for the reader. They also touch upon the balance between providing sufficient detail and maintaining narrative pace, and the differing challenges of describing indoor versus outdoor settings.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2646

In this episode, V.E. Griffith, Miss Catherine M.H., and Lon Varnadore discuss the process of editing worldbuilding in creative writing. They explore what worldbuilding entails, from creating the physical environment to the cultural nuances of a story. Each host shares their personal approach to editing worldbuilding, revealing they have different methods which depend on their individual writing style and the specific story or genre. Key areas discussed include using sensory details to enrich the world, incorporating cultural elements through character interactions and dialogue, and the importance of maintaining a consistent "story bible" to track changes made during the editing process. Ultimately, they conclude there is no single correct way to edit worldbuilding, but that practice and understanding one's own tendencies are crucial.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2643

This episode features co-hosts VE Griffith and Miss Catherine MH discussing their differing approaches to editing fictional characters. They explain that characters are essential to a story, acting as the vehicle through which readers experience the narrative. VE, a plotter, emphasizes the importance of planning aspects like physical traits, emotional makeup, dialogue, attitudes, and growth arcs, often reviewing these in separate passes. Catherine, a pantser, describes her process as more intuitive, where characters "visit" her and their physical appearance and speech patterns are naturally revealed, with her editing focusing on ensuring consistency in descriptions and dialogue, as well as the characters' interactions with others and their underlying goals. Both hosts acknowledge the value of differing methods and the reader's connection to well-developed characters.The Revision Wizards are at https://www.revisionwizards.comV.E. Griffith's website: https://www.vegriffith.comMiss Catherine M.H.'s website: https://www.scribes-pen.comLon's Twitter/X: @lonvarnadore1Lon's Instagram: @lon_scribbler Transcript at: https://revisionwizards.com/?p=2641