Dorianne Laux: quiet blasphemy
Dorianne’s episode concludes Season 4. We’ll be back in the new year with yet another group of fantastic poets, including torrin a. greathouse and Donika Kelly!! This holiday season, if you’ve been enjoying the podcast and you’re looking for how to donate to causes that promote things you believe in, please consider Melody or Witchcraft. At as little as $7/ month, your paid subscription or gift subscription helps me cover editing and hosting platforms, consultations, equipment like mics and headphones, guests’ books, and generally keep up with this time-intensive labor of love. Thank you. The Melody or Witchcraft podcast interviews begin with a love for poetry, its craft, and a major literary ancestor: Emily Dickinson. I’m your host, Kathryn Petruccelli, a poet, workshop leader, Substacker, & former guide for the Emily Dickinson Museum in Amherst, Massachusetts. Listen in to hear about the concentric circles of the past and the present. Names or poetic references are fleshed out or linked to in the show notes if not in the moment. Thanks for being a listener! Rate us on Spotify HERE, or Apple Podcasts HERE.kathrynpetruccelli.substack.com for complete show notes, photos, & links. I loved getting to speak with this matriarch of poetry. Many years ago, I was part of a workshop Dorianne Laux gave in Ellen Bass’ living room and I can still remember the poem I brought to it, how my young poet brain had to work to take in Dorianne’s feedback (I mean, to think something had to be extracted from my precious, unassailable poem!?). When we spoke back in the spring, Dorianne was recovering from a serious illness and was still quite weak. I was acutely aware of not wanting to tax her, and perhaps for that reason, at the end of our conversation when the topic of Carolyn Forché came up, I regrettably didn’t think to ask her more about how she saw Forché’s influence and to present a bit about her for folks who might not be familiar. Therefore, I decided to record one of Forché’s iconic poems from her collection The Country Between Us after the outro for this episode. So, hang in there past our theme music and you’ll hear me read “The Colonel.” It gives a solid, brutal introduction to some of the material the book handles after Carolyn Forché’s time in El Salvador in the 1970s. Those of you familiar, will know that Forché calls herself a poet of witness, then and now. For good reason. In Episode 25, Dorianne & I chat monorhymes, the mind of the poet, the cosmos, going beyond what satisfies us on the page, & Carolyn Forché. (Recorded March 30, 2026) Dorianne Laux is the author of seven books of poetry, including Only As the Day is Long: New and Selected Poems, which was named a finalist for the 2020 Pulitzer Prize for Poetry. Her other collections include The Book of Men, Facts About the Moon, Awake; What We Carry, a finalist for the National Book Critic’s Circle Award; and Smoke. Her latest collection of poetry is Life On Earth and was released in January of 2024. Finger Exercises for Poets, a book of concise craft essays and exercises for poets was released in July 2024. The Dickinson poem Dorianne chose: I heard a Fly buzz - when I died -The Stillness in the RoomWas like the Stillness in the Air -Between the Heaves of Storm - The Eyes around - had wrung them dry -And Breaths were gathering firmFor that last Onset - when the KingBe witnessed - in the Room - I willed my Keepsakes - Signed awayWhat portion of me beAssignable - and then it wasThere interposed a Fly - With Blue - uncertain - stumbling Buzz -Between the light - and me -And then the Windows failed - and thenI could not see to see - Fascicle 26, Sheet 1, (Fr591, J465) c. summer 1863 Emily SaidDorianne Laux Emily said she heard a fly buzzwhen she died, heard it whizzover her head, troubling her frizzedhair. What will I hear? Showbiztunes on the radio, the megahertzfuzz when the station picks up Yaz,not the Hall-of-Famer or the Pezof contraceptives, but the jazzyflash-in-the-pan ’80’s techno-pop star, peach fuzzon her rouged cheeks singing Pal-easeDon’t Go through a kazoo. Will my old love spritzthe air with the perfume of old roses,buy me the white satin Mercedes-Benzof pillows, string a rainbow blitzof crystals in the window—quartz, topaz—or will I die wheezing, listening to a quizshow: What year is this? Who was the 44th Prezof the United States? Where is the SuezCanal? Are you too hot? Cold? Freezing? Other Dickinson poems mentioned in the interview: There is a pain—so utter—It swallows substance up—Then covers the Abyss with Trance—So Memory can stepAround—across—upon it—As one within a Swoon—Goes safely—where an open eye—Would drop Him—Bone by Bone. Concepts, people, poems mentioned: I mention immortality as her “flood subject.” In Letter 319 June 9, 1866 to Thomas Wentworth Higginson, Dickinson writes,You mention Immortality.That is the Flood subject. Helen Vendler (Alfred, Lord) Tennyson “Tintern Abbey” is William Wordsworth’s poem whose full title is “Lines Composed a Few Miles above Tintern Abbey, On Revisiting the Banks of the Wye during a Tour. July 13, 1798” Monorhyme Kim Addonizio “Men” by Dorianne (which is another example of a monorhyme) Percy Bysshe Shelley’s “Ozymandias” Carolyn Forché’s 1981 book, The Country Between Us chronicling her time in El Salvador in the 1970s. (link gives a good summary) Thank you for listening and reading. Was it worth $7/month? One of the benefits of paid subscriptions are free stand-alone workshops like this one below! And you KNOW Dorianne’s poems will be included in a workshop called THE COSMOS. Thank you. This is a public episode. 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